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I bleed for thee
By Gothguy720

One for the tension, one for the stress, one for the darkness that eats

at my heart. One for the loneliness, one for the hatrid that consumes

my every waking moment. One for the blood that i have spilt, one for

my sins, one for my jelousy that drove me insane. One for the treason,

one for the murder, one for the guiltiness of knowing what i've done.

One for the critisizm, one anguish, one for the voice that dictates my

every action. One for the torture, one for bullshit, one for taunting that

ive been through. One for the weapons, one for the plans, one for the

bodies that they never found. One for the act, one for the bloody mess,

one for the stains on my hands. One for the after life, one for the

secrets that are locked in my head, one last cut for me, as i bleed for

thee.
©2006-2009 ~Gothguy720
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This poem is a result of just throwing together several ideas at once and writing them down without any thought. so if this seems random to you THATS BECAUSE IT IS PROBABLY.
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Very nice! :clap:

Also, this format is easier to read. :thumbsup:

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Thank you. I tried to keep the poem easy to read for those who are visually impared. Sort of.

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Outreaching the closest left side the city sleeps beneath me
I really like this. :worship:
Thankyou for your compliment. ^_^

in return i :worship: u

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Outreaching the closest left side the city sleeps beneath me
T-that's Beautiful :]

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Darkness; into the night she flees. A cryptic aura sets in with the wind blowing the fallen leaves around her feet. A glimmer shines for a moment, before she disappears into an alleyway. Dare to follow her?
no, youre beautiful. OHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!! :w00t:

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Outreaching the closest left side the city sleeps beneath me
beautiful

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Serenity isn't freedom from the storm, but peace within the storm
Thanks, if you liked that then youd probably like my other prose and poetry

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Outreaching the closest left side the city sleeps beneath me
You're welcome, darling. I will definantly have to check out your other writings. :heart:

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Serenity isn't freedom from the storm, but peace within the storm

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